Roberta sat in the cafe
stiring her coffee. Staring at the patchwork of stains on the
off-white table cloth. It had been one hell of a day. This was not
the sort of place she would normally frequent but the artificial
strip lighting had seemed an oasis on a gloomy day. The drizzle had
been non stop all day coupled with the early nightfall was not a
great combo. Picking up a sachet of sugar Roberta shook it gently
before tearing the end. The sugar cascading down into the swirling
drink. Once it had dissolved Roberta took a sip. The sweetness
balancing out the bitterness of the strong coffee. Sitting back in
her chair Roberta laced her fingers together around the mug. The
warmth seeping into her as she was finally able to relax. Watching
the passing glow of headlights Roberta became lost in her own world.
So much so that she must have missed the clinking of the bell that
signified the entrance of another stranger.
He was not handsome in
the conventional sense but there was something about him. An air of
confidence, he moved with what in the pictures they called a deadly
grace. Roberta felt her heart skip when he met her eyes. She had
never seen such green eyes. Emeralds could not compete with such
beauty. He did not head to the counter but with a smile that turned
him into the most desirable man she had ever seen, he walked over.
He gestured to the seat
opposite and she nodded yes. She was not used to feeling like this
and did not trust her voice. She felt herself flushing as the silence
lengthened. He calmly sat opposite with a small smile playing on his
lips. Roberta racked her brains for something to say, anything to
break this silence. Nothing came to mind and so she sat there feeling
foolish.
Why did he not order a
drink, talk to her? Just sitting there looking so damn good. Roberta
felt herself growing angry. This stranger was having a very profound
affect. Why did this silence matter so much? There was something she
could not put her finger on. With her anger Roberta found a reservoir
of strength and determined she would not be the first to speak. In
this battle of wills she would be the victor.
Making herself appear
relaxed she slouched into her chair a little more. The cold hard
plastic not making it very comfortable. Taking a long sip of the
coffee Roberta studied him more over the rim of the mug. He was
looking directly into her eyes and that look spoke more than words.
Another sip of coffee and she really was not having to pretend to be
relaxed.
In silence they held
their conversation. Roberta letting go the angst of the day as he
patiently sat there. His gaze conveying compassion. He truly
understood, the weight of the day was gone and she knew her eyes were
shining with new hope. Feeling better than she had in days, the joy
shining from his eyes at her happiness moved her to tears.
Had any man ever
understood her in this way? Roberta wondered if she would ever hear
his voice or if she would ever need to. Without words he had healed
what was broken. She wished she could do the same for him. Sorrow was
in his gaze now. Emeralds glistening as moisture welled in them. She
felt his pain and surprise at his own reaction to her.
His pain was almost
unbearable, tears streamed down her face. If only she could help.
Roberta looked on conveying hope and counselling patience. A look of
sheer panic crossed his face. He moved for the first time his hands
reaching across the table. Roberta place her mug on the table. And
her hand was just about to intercept his when she was distracted.
The man who had served
her the coffee early had come over. He looked concerned as he studied
her face. Roberta realised how this must look and she was touched
that he would take the time to come over. He said something to her
and as she started to reply but stopped mid sentence. What was it he
had said?
“A young woman like
you should not be sitting all alone, crying.....”
Thank you so much, Ray :) I loved it!!! You're such a brillant writer! I found it very ironic that you gave the stranger green eyes. My husband has green eyes, but he's alive!
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story!!! :-D
ReplyDeleteAww...so emotional So simple and intense.
ReplyDeleteJust how I like it.
Bravo, my friend.
Eyes always say so much. And I do love green eyes. Very nice story.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your lovely comments :-) x
ReplyDeleteWow. Very nice Raymond.!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this!
ReplyDeletesixth paragraph typo 'his patiently sat ? also the same paragraph reads 'in silence they held their conversation' think it would read better with 'in silence they spoke' ? @clarkeianclarke
ReplyDeleteNice one Ray...x
ReplyDeleteGreat story, really enjoyed it and was totally drawn in to the characters, the place and the emotions @simonpert
ReplyDeletewhen the sky is working ITself into fit outside trying to make u a rainbow,,,,love john
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